UC知道求教英文/ENGLISH高手！！儿童英文朗诵稿，修订完美
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Hello, everybody!
My name is Lucy. I’m five years old. I come from big class of fengdan kindergarden. I love English very much. Now, a story for you:
The Blue Wooden Cabin in the Forest
There is an old beautiful blue wooden cabin in the forest. A river runs around it and there are many beautiful flowers and lots of green grass near it. All of the animals like this beautiful and clean place.
The fox says: “I love the green grass. I love to play on the grass!”
The duck says: “I love the clean river. I like to swim in it.”
One day. A man from the city finds this beautiful place. He shouts: “Oh! What a beautiful blue wooden cabin! I like it! I’ll tell others in the city.”
“Beep! Beep!” Many people arrive at the cabin by bus. They shout: “What a beautiful place! Let’s sing and dance!” They make a big noise in the forest. All of the animals are afraid to go out!
In the evening, al
首先不是kindergarden是kindergarten. and then 楼上的建议不错但小孩不会说很难的词..like currently? right? so u can fix it to
Hi, i'm Lucy, i'm five year-old, i'm from clss X of fengdan kindergarten. I really
下面的我就把一些难的句子简化以下..这样大家都容易懂小孩也会说..
A river runs around it and there are many beautiful flowers and lots of green grass near it。改成 the river runs around the cabin, it surround by the flowers and trees.
The animals and human live together belongs to everyone forever! 是一个病句，all the animals and human live together happily ever after.(the cabin belongs to everybody forever)如果你想加上括号里的也行。
the end!! thank you all.
看了楼下的The fox says: “I love the green grass. I love to play(I like playing) on the grass!”
The duck says: “I love the clean river. I like to swim (like swimming)in it.” 不应该是swimming,it should be swim, swim is the right one. 我不知道中国现在是怎么教英文的，但加拿大是说swim instead of swimming sometimes
and 过去式is not really important in Canada... i suggest not u