帮我看看这演讲稿有没有语病,最佳的100积分

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/07/05 16:44:12
下星期演讲比赛的稿,明天得交定稿的.
有的是我自己写的,有的是复制别人的.
大家帮我看看有没有语病,改一下...如果觉得该补充的也帮我补上去,谢谢.如果真的很好,我会追加分.不过如果真的大家都随便对待,那我宁可选无满意答案...
先在这里谢过了...
Hello,everyone.We are from Class 071 of civil engineering.

My name is ZhuoRan.This is my first time to take part in English Speaking Competition.I have a little nerves.Maybe I will forget how to continue my speech next minutes.If it really happened,please forgive me.Thank you.

My name is Zhang Lijun.

Today our topic is “What should we do for the Olympic Games?
――Let’s offer a better China for it.”

Recently,there are a lot of news about some west country repel the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games.Although the statesman of those country declare they never repel the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games. Do you ever think about why some people repel this Olympic Games host in Beijing ?Because our motherland—China is not great enough in their eyes.So we ,college students,as the pillar of country, should fling our

Hello,everyone.We are from Class 071 of civil engineering.

My name is ZhuoRan.This is my first time to take part in English Speaking Competition.I am a little nervous.Maybe I will forget how to continue my speech next minute.If it really happens,please forgive me.Thank you.

My name is Zhang Lijun.

Today our topic is “What should we do for the Olympic Games?
――Let’s offer a better China for it.”

Recently,there are a lot of news about some western countries trying to boycott the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games.Although the statesmen of those countries declared they did not boycott the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games. Do you ever think why some people try to boycott this Olympic Games hosted in Beijing ?Because our motherland—China is not powerful enough in their eyes.So we ,college students,as the backbones of our country, should devote ourselves to the work of improving our motherland.Only we offer a better China for this Olympic Games,can