帮忙检查英文语法！现在就要！〔100分悬赏〕

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Other teaching staffs at Mr Moran's school believed he should use his body as a block to help break up the fight.
Since we’re looking back now, it’s simple for anyone to discuss about Mr Moran’s defeat.
None knows the weight of another's burden, but when it actually happens, how many of them would step forward and use their body to stop the fight?
Also according to VCAT, there is no immutable rule that a teacher should physically intervene in a fight between students.
Therefore Mr Moran’s reaction was reasonable and suitable for the situation.
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Yes, protect student’s safety is a part of teacher’s duty, but teenagers have their own ideology.
Therefore parents won’t treat teenagers the same way as treating primary school kids, and same for the teachers.
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The regulation authorises 'reasonable' action which 'may be required’ to protect student and staff.
Altho

Other teaching staff at Mr Moran's school believed that he should use his body as a block to help breaking up the fight.
Since we’re looking back now(since是自从和now接不合适吧,不太清楚您要表达的意思，不知怎么改） it’s simple for anyone to discuss about Mr Moran’s defeat（defeat是动词，改名词）.
There is no one knows the weight of another's burden, but when it actually happens, how many of them would step forward and use their body to stop the fight?
Also according to VCAT, there is no immutable rule that a teacher should physically intervene in a fight between students.
Therefore Mr Moran’s reaction was reasonable and suitable for the situation（此句无主语）.
Yes, protecting student’s safety is a part of teacher’s duty, but teenagers have their own ideology.
Therefore parents won’t treat teenagers the same way as treating primary school kids, and same for the teachers. （主语不明显）
我个人觉得错误比较多，大部分不是语法错误，而是很容易产生歧义，不清楚您的内容是自己的写的还是摘录的，如果是自己的写的，你可以把中文内容给我，我给你翻译，如果是文章的。你可以把大概的中文的意思给我。我给您改用其他