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Department of Philosophy
Nanjing University
Nanjing 210093
P.R. China
Tel:+86-25-83590000

April 3, 2008

Professor Bush. Clinton, Editor
The Johns Hopkins University Press
701 W. 40th St., Suite 275
Baltimore, Maryland 21211
U.S.A

Dear Prof. Bush:
I am an associate professor of Nanjing University, I’m now submitting a paper titled How to do Things with Texts which was delivered at the “International Symposium on Literary Criticism” hold at Oxford University in December 8-9,2007. I hope it is acceptable to your prestigious Journal Philosophy and Literature.

BTW, I cited something from the book listed in the references of your paper which published in Journal of Contemporary Philosophy (Vol. 19, 2006). The book is listed as follow: "Bush. Johnson, et al. The Doctrine of Virtue. New York: Macmillan, 2004." Do you happen to know any information about Prof. Bush and Professor Johnson?

Dear Prof. Bush:

I am an associate professor of Nanjing University. (用句号来断句,不是逗号“,”) I’m now submitting a paper titled “How to do Things with Texts”(去掉which was) delivered at the International Symposium on Literary Criticism (冒号放错了)(去掉hold) in (不用at) Oxford University in December 8-9,2007.

I hope it is acceptable to your prestigious Journal Philosophy and Literature.
改: I look forward to my gaining acceptance by your prestigious Journal Philosophy and Literature.

BTW, I cited a publication (what "something"?) from the book listed in the references of your paper (去掉which,多余) published in Journal of Contemporary Philosophy (Vol. 19, 2006). The book is (as follow后面必须加s,as follows这是惯用式) :"Bush. Johnson, et al. The Doctrine of Virtue. New York: Macmillan, 2004." Do you happen to have (不用know) any information about Prof. Bush and Professor Johnson? I appreciate (use active voice - you are not to be entertained - "am appreciat