英语描写,改正一下,thx

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/06/28 06:01:48
it is a mammal.it eats dog's food.it is very cute.it is little.it is honest to its master.it can learn some special moving for funny. it is our good friend and it is friendly.
it is playful,it can play with us when we bored.it has a very ningenious nose,it can smell many scents.it has a little body and a little head.it has four legs.it has soft fur and it has short tail.

有错误吗?帮忙改成100分。
谢谢

it eats dog's food。去掉,狗当然吃狗食。it can learn some special moving for funny。moving改成action,动作。funny 改成 fun
it is playful,it can play with us when we bored.把“,”改成and,we bored改成we feel bored.it has a very ningenious nose,it can smell many scents.ningenious改成ingenious“,”改成and ,
many scents改成many kinds of sents,

如果不是写诗的话,我认为重复语it太多了,使得整个文章很乏味。
比如最后一句应该就是it has a little head ,a little body and a littl tail with four legs.
另外气味是可数的吗?应该改成it can smell many kinds of scent.

it is a mammal and it eats dog's food.it is very cute but little.it not only honest to its master,but can do some special moving for funny. it is a good friend for us.
when we are boring,it can play with us .it has a very ningenious nose for it can smell many scents.it has soft fur and it has short tail and a little body and a little head with four legs.

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