英语病句修改!在线等!!!!!!!

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/06/27 09:16:56
This pill will whiten skin from within and to语法 help defend against new signs of aging from forming.

Many girls and women are wonder语法 why the Hollywood stars could have this kind of healthy beauty.

The Diamond whitening pill will not only whitens you skin but also improves语法 better health.

分开的地方是错误的地方,但是我不会改不知道是什么语法错误,希望大家帮忙修改一下,小弟感激不尽!

第一题,to去掉。因为help和whiten是并列的,前面有will,都用原型.
第二题,wonder加ing。前面有are。
第三题把improve改成brings或者别的动词,因为improve本身就是改善的意思,better也有变得更好的意思,二者重复了。或者把better去掉,如果改后面的也行的话。

2.wondering
3.not only whiten ...but also improve health