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Dear Yin Jie ,
We have a birthday party on this weekend.We will meet at Shin-Chun and have dinner together.The party will be start at my friend's home.My friend is Korean.So we can practice Korean with her.The dinner will be at 6:00pm.So we will meet at the Shin-Chun subway station at 5:30pm.
The dinner will be grand.We will not eat rice.So we will eat Japanese food.Such as my favor suchi,sashimi,deep fried chicken and so on...There is no vegetable.So we will eat much fresh fruit.and we will drink some wine,and then we will eat birthday cake.It will be a great birthday party,expect that you will be come.
practice----practise
其他没空看，也没心情看，谁写得这么糟
Dear Yin Jie ,
We are going to have a birthday party at/on this weekend.The party will start at my friend's house.My friend is a Korean.So we can practise Korean with her.The dinner will be at 6:00pm.So shall we meet at the Shin-Chun subway station at 5:30pm?
The dinner will be hearty(grand用来修饰家常便饭似乎太过正式了).We will not have rice.Instead we will eat Japanese food such as my favorite suchi,sashimi,deep fried chicken and so on...There is no vegetable,but we will eat plenty of fresh fruit.And we will also drink some wine and then eat the birthday cake.It won't be a great birthday party unless you come.
Yours,
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Dear Yin Jie ,
We are going to have a birthday party (on 省略)this weekend.The party will(start如果在朋友家开始,那么在哪里结束?不准确.改为take place) at my friend's house.(my friend 改为She)is a Korean.So we can pr