看一下这段话有语法错误吗？

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When I was a child, I met a boy, the boy looks like an egg. And... The boy is you! OK,OK, just a joke. You’re a clever and sunning boy. I hope you don’t forget me, forever and forever......

无论这段话标点错，还是语法哪里有错，只要有错，就请你们帮我改过来。只需要把这段话复制，然后把错了的改过来就OK了。多谢！

When I was a child, I met a boy, the boy looks like an egg. And... The boy is you! OK,OK, just a joke. You’re a clever and sunning boy. I hope you don’t forget me, forever and forever

the boy （looked） like an egg。
I hope you （won’t） forget me。
就这两个错的

When I was a child, I met a boy, the boy looked like an egg. And... The boy was you! OK,OK, just a joke. You’re a clever and sunning(这是什么？？？) boy. I hope you won’t forget me forever

When I was a child, I met a boy, the boy looked like an egg. And... The boy is you! OK,OK, it's just a joke. You're clever and sunny. I hope you won't forget me, forever and ever......

When I was a child, I met a boy.The boy looks like an egg. And... The boy is you! OK,OK, just a joke. You’re a clever and sunny boy. I hope you don’t forget me, forever and forever......