请问这么写有没有错误

来源：百度知道编辑：UC知道时间：2024/07/03 00:00:47

I am writing in applying for further study as Ph.D studentship at your university.

应该可以吧!
但这样是不是更好呢?I am writing to apply for further study on PhD in your university.

I am applying for PhD studentship at XX university....

没必要写那么长而且重复的东西。。。而且“further study as Ph.D studentship”一般都不会那么用的了。。

楼上说得对。

不过楼主这个水平.....错得离谱...真的能去念么?

DFGHJ