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HOLD ON(翻译得有点烂哦)
Compose / Lyrics / Vocal / Green Day.

As I stepped to the edge
当我走向边缘
Beyond the shadow of a doubt
不容置疑
With my conscience beating
伴随我良心的跳动
Like the pulls of a drum
就象鼓产生的牵引
That hammers on and on
使槌契而不舍的锤击
Until I reach the break of the day
直到我走到破碎的那一天
As the sun beats down
当夕阳西下
The halfway house
这个驿站
Has my conscience beating
使我良心不断敲打
The sound in my ear
耳朵里的声音
The will to persevere
坚持的决心
As I reach the break of the day
当我到达破碎的那一天
When you lost all hope and excuses
当你所有梦想破碎与理由都穷尽的时候
And the cheap stakes & losers
这个不起眼的失败者
Nothing's left to cling onto
没有什么可以再坚持
You got to hold on yourself
你应该坚持做你自己
A cry of hope
希望的哭泣
A plea for peace
和睦的恳求
And my conscience beating
我的良心在跳动
It's not what I want for
那不是我想要的