请帮我看看这句话有错吗

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my idol is Michael Jordan and I dream one day I could play basketball as good as him.

梦想，应该使用dream of doing sth.改为
my idol is MJ. My dream is that I could play basketball as good as him in one day.
或者
My idow is MJ and I dream of playing basketall as good as him in one day.

as good as him 改成as well as him

修饰动词要用副词

My idol is Michael Jordan and i drean of playing basketball as good as him one day.