UC知道今年高考我的英语作文.帮忙估分(天津)
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作文题目就是看三副图.大概就是说今天是老爹过生日.给他买完礼物做地铁回家.给个老奶奶让座.老奶奶说谢谢. 以日记的形式
给我估个分..谢谢... (满分25)
Today is my father's birthday. this afternoon.I bought a present which I paid masses of time to select. What a surprise to my father.He must very happy for what I did.
After bought the present. I got on a subtation train.A little later.An old woman got on the train with many bags which looks like heavy.However.there was no seat for the lady.What' worse.there was nobody stood up to let the lady sitted.A minute went by.I stood up and said to the lady"Sit down.please.."A smile was saw on her face"Thank you.Child!"She said.
Today.my father got a present.SO did I .I was proud for what I did.
给我估个分..谢谢... (满分25)
Today is my father's birthday. this afternoon.I bought a present which I paid masses of time to select. What a surprise to my father.He must very happy for what I did.
After bought the present. I got on a subtation train.A little later.An old woman got on the train with many bags which looks like heavy.However.there was no seat for the lady.What' worse.there was nobody stood up to let the lady sitted.A minute went by.I stood up and said to the lady"Sit down.please.."A smile was saw on her face"Thank you.Child!"She said.
Today.my father got a present.SO did I .I was proud for what I did.
汗……
这位仁兄，我知道你很想得高分，但我想你这篇英语文章很够呛。
文章分三段，这点不错；
主要问题是语法上，有几处错误，我刚刚是用2分钟看完的，高考评卷也就这个速度。这样的话在语法上会扣掉你7分到8分，剩下的就是看你字体了，比较好的话可以得16到17分，次点的话可以得到12到13分。
希望你其他成绩会比较好。
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