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来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/07/07 09:05:08
文文长了点，不好意思哈o(∩_∩)o...英语达人你在哪里～～
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A major earthquake measuring 8.0 on the Richter scale jolted Wenchuan County of southwest China's Sichuan Province at 2:28 p.m.
The earthquake caused tens of thousands of casualties and countless buildings collapsed. In the face of disaster, the Chinese people surmount the country to accept donations and more than 400 billion yuan, many volunteers have joined relief operations in various parts of the world are concerned about Sichuan, and gave himself a love.
Maybe after the quake many people might change their life's attitude,cherish the life and face the brutal life,and of course learn how to escape when quake happen.
No matter what happens, as long as we are together, we will never ever ever ever give up!There is always hope and love!
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呼唤英语达人给俺看看这篇文文有没语法错误等等，看见语法错误就直接往上修改就行～～～～在这谢
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A major earthquake measuring 8.0 on the Richter scale jolted Wenchuan County of southwest China's Sichuan Province at 2:28 p.m.
The earthquake caused tens of thousands of casualties and countless buildings collapsed. In the face of disaster, the Chinese people surmount the country to accept donations and more than 400 billion yuan, many volunteers have joined relief operations in various parts of the world are concerned about Sichuan, and gave himself a love.
Maybe after the quake many people might change their life's attitude,cherish the life and face the brutal life,and of course learn how to escape when quake happen.
No matter what happens, as long as we are together, we will never ever ever ever give up!There is always hope and love!
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呼唤英语达人给俺看看这篇文文有没语法错误等等，看见语法错误就直接往上修改就行～～～～在这谢
A major earthquake measuring 8.0 on the Richter scale jolted Wenchuan County of southwest China's Sichuan Province at 2:28 p.m.
The earthquake took tens of thousands of lives and caused countless buildings to collapse. In the face of disaster, the Chinese people surmount the country to accept donations of more than 400 billion yuan. Many volunteers have joined relief operations in various parts of the world to help the affected people.
Maybe after the quake many people might change their attitude,cherish their life and face the brutal reality,and of course learn how to escape when earthquake happens.
No matter what happens, as long as we are together, we will never ever give up!There is always hope and love!
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