帮忙检查一下我写的英语作文

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2008 Olympic Games will conduct in Beijing,Regarding each Chinese,That is make peopel be proud an and proud thing ,I am one middle school student,For welcoming Olympic Games,I will study well,Courtesy treat others,Serve as a excellent Chinese citizen,Cheer for Beijing,Cheer for Olympic Games,I believed that 2008 Beijing Olympic Games certainly complete success.!

有病句或是不对的地方帮我指出来,告诉我正确的.
英语我还不大好,麻烦你们了

2008 Olympic Games(错误,必须要有冠词the) will conduct(错误,应该用被动语态be conducted) in Beijing,(用句号)Regarding each Chinese,That is (加 to )make peopel be proud an and proud thing(不通,难以修改) ,I am one (用a)middle school student,(用句号)For(for不能放句首,用As to) welcoming Olympic Games,I will study well,Courtesy treat others,Serve as a excellent Chinese citizen,Cheer for Beijing,Cheer for Olympic Games,I believed that 2008 Beijing Olympic Games certainly complete success.!(不通,是不是机器翻译的?)