帮我看看这段英语有没有什么问题? 很简单

都不太好,帮你改下.

Dear Miss Yan,

You email is received with thanks, but, why there is no quotation of the CCD? Please send it to me again.

With best regards.

有点问题你看看这样行不
Dear Miss Yan
I received it and apreciated it. But, can we use the qutation of CCD? Please send it to me again
Thanks a lot!

没什么问题吧，

修改后的,请注意标点等。

Dear Miss Yan,

I have received the Email(把你收到的东西英文替换Email) and apreciated what you have done. However, I didn't find the quotation of the CCD, could you please send it once more?

King regards.