帮忙看看我的英语呗

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Hi Sarah,
How do you do?
I am Wang and I’m from China.

As you know, I attended college entrance examination and I’ll be a university student. When I was a child, I liked astronomy. So I wanted to be a scientist at that time. When I know you study astronomy/astrophysics in Florida institute of technology, I feel very happy that we are on common taste.

Now, I want to be a doctor, so I think I’ll study medicine in college.
Because I don’t know my examination results, I’m not absolutely sure that I’ll study medicine.(I’m nervous of my examination results right now. *^^*)

I like listening to music. Did you listen the backstreet boys’ songs? I think their r songs are very good. What do you think about?

Hope to hear from you soon.
Best wishes.

Wang

应该 I have attended…… student soon
astrophysics
know you are studying
学校名字要大写Institute of Technology
common interest
I am decided to study……
I haven't known
have you ever listen to ……
Looking forward to hearing from you

Chinglish 太多,基本上改这么多,其中还有许多,实在没法下手了

great!