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来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/09/14 21:37:47
有关于抗震救灾的英语文章，检查下有没有语法问题，看一下有没有语法错误，顺便帮我加几句有文采的句子。
There was a terrible earthquake. Many students can not go to school because plenty of schools were destroyed.A lot of people lost their homes and lives.We all feel sad.We should do something as much as possible to help them.We can raise money to them and sent food drinks and tents to them. We should give them warmth.

It was a terrible earthquake. Many students can not go to school ,because plenty of schools were destroyed.A lot of people lost their homes and lives.We all felt sad.We should do somethings as many as possible to help them.We could raise money to them and sent foods and drinks and tents to them. We should give them warmth.

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倒数第二行的 "we can raise money to them" 改为”we can raise money for them"

There was a terrible earthquake. Many students can not go to school because plenty of schools were destroyed.A lot of people lost their houses and lives.We all feel sad.We should do something as much as possible to help them.We can dominate money to them and send food drinks and tents to them. We should give them warmth.

There was a terrible earthquake. Many students can not go to school because plenty of schools were destroyed.A lot of people lost their homes and lives.We all feel sad.We should do something as much as possible to help them.We can rais