UC知道帮我改改英语作文，要快！！考试有用的 高分！！高分
来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/09/13 03:35:54
You may never heard about Wenchuan befor 12 May 2008 ,but the "Wnechuan earthquake" will never be forgotten by Chinese people.
And this earthquake startled all over the world.All walks of made caring donation to the victims of the deadly earthquake in Wenchuan . A spot very small ,but benevolence is multipier by 1,300,000,000 that will be collect love's sea. And the major difficult will divide 1,300,000,000 wil be four large
brush-writter Chinese characters :Unity is strength.
这里有好都句子是抄的，但我还的不放心，
拜托各位了！！！
不然，在帮我写一篇也可以
过了今晚就没用拉！！
And this earthquake startled all over the world.All walks of made caring donation to the victims of the deadly earthquake in Wenchuan . A spot very small ,but benevolence is multipier by 1,300,000,000 that will be collect love's sea. And the major difficult will divide 1,300,000,000 wil be four large
brush-writter Chinese characters :Unity is strength.
这里有好都句子是抄的，但我还的不放心，
拜托各位了！！！
不然，在帮我写一篇也可以
过了今晚就没用拉！！
随便拉
befor---before
heard---hear(have heard)
collect---collected
to be love's sea
哎呀，，我看得好乱。。。
挺好的，就是细节问题，除了楼上说的，还有startled--started,你要相信自己，加油，呵呵~~
You may never heard about Wenchuan befor 12 May 2008 ,but the "Wnechuan earthquake" will never be forgotten by Chinese people.
And this earthquake startled all over the world.All walks of made caring donation to the victims of the deadly earthquake in Wenchuan . A spot very small ,but benevolence is multipier by 1,300,000,000 that will be collect love's sea. And the major difficult will divide 1,300,000,000 wil be four large
brush-writter Chinese characters :Unity is strength.
不错