一篇七年级英语简单的作文，看看有没有什么语法错误？

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my name is li ping p,i'am a 13years old girl.i'm a student in no.1 middle school.in fact,i likes cjildrens very much.and i can help childrens of sports and music.i relly likes playing basketball vrry well,and i likes music,too.i can play the guitar.and i know a little big about geography,i can tall children.
i can speak chinese very wall and i can a little english,japanese.
题目要求是应聘一个照顾孩子的职业，要求是会体育，音乐。结尾，开头，给出了，就不写了。

第二排children拼错了
第二排，and i can help children with sports and music.
第三排i really like playing basketball very well,and i like music too
第四排and i know a little bit about geography，i can teach children
第五排i can speak chinese very well and i can speak a little english and japanese

修改如下,请过目!
My name is Li Ping. I'm a 13-year-old girl. I'm a student in No.1 Middle School. In fact, I like children very much, and I can help children with their sports and music. I relly like playing basketball very much, and I like music,too. I can play the guitar, and I know a little about geography, which I can teach children.
I can speak Chinese very well and I know a little about English and Japanese.

错的太多了
my name is li ping p,i'am 13 years old .i'm a student in no.1 middle school.in fact,i like children very much.and i can help children with sports and music.i relly like playing basketball ,and i like music,too.i can play the guitar.and i kn