UC知道我这有一篇英语文章 谁来给我修改一下哈~^-^(是写给爱丽丝学院制作组哒~)
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刚才找动漫 看到一个人回复说让大家去写信给Alice
请他们画第二部...
也许这样做不太现实 可能他们根本没时间看你写的信
但我还是抱着试试的心态
希望他们能看到我写的信
并且能试着画一下第二部...
因为我很喜欢爱丽丝学院哪~*^-^*
英语不好...-.-大家帮我挑挑错吧~(日文是Alice里的人名 大家猜着读吧~)
I'm a middle school student.I can't speak Japanese.And my English is not very good.Even though,i write this letter to you.The reason is that I really love the Alice College.The gut is very fascinating.And i was moved deeply by さくら みかん's spirit.She just a 10-year-old girl.But she has already had to face a lot of challenge.Maybe if i were her,I will escape...
さくら みかん has a great sense of adamancy and there is a smile on her face whenever ひゅうが なつめ see her.Tell the truth,I would like to have a friend like さくら みかん,いまい ほたる,ひゅうが なつめ,のぎ るか and all the students and teachers in the Alice College.
I have watched this cartoon three times.I was pleased as i watched it.I laughed,cried,and i was angry...But i laughed in most time.Yes,you do it.I think you
请他们画第二部...
也许这样做不太现实 可能他们根本没时间看你写的信
但我还是抱着试试的心态
希望他们能看到我写的信
并且能试着画一下第二部...
因为我很喜欢爱丽丝学院哪~*^-^*
英语不好...-.-大家帮我挑挑错吧~(日文是Alice里的人名 大家猜着读吧~)
I'm a middle school student.I can't speak Japanese.And my English is not very good.Even though,i write this letter to you.The reason is that I really love the Alice College.The gut is very fascinating.And i was moved deeply by さくら みかん's spirit.She just a 10-year-old girl.But she has already had to face a lot of challenge.Maybe if i were her,I will escape...
さくら みかん has a great sense of adamancy and there is a smile on her face whenever ひゅうが なつめ see her.Tell the truth,I would like to have a friend like さくら みかん,いまい ほたる,ひゅうが なつめ,のぎ るか and all the students and teachers in the Alice College.
I have watched this cartoon three times.I was pleased as i watched it.I laughed,cried,and i was angry...But i laughed in most time.Yes,you do it.I think you
我只是提出自己的一点看法，提得不好请别见怪！
1.我觉得第一句完全可以不好：为什么说自己英语不好呢？建议去掉1
2.第二句太罗嗦了！我改为：
The reason I write to you is that ....
3.Tell the truth,I would like to have a friend like さくら みかん,いまい ほたる,ひゅうが なつめ,のぎ るか and all the students and teachers in the Alice College.
这句后面的all the students 改为 other students
4.But i laughed in most time有点中国式
建议改为：去掉in ,或者是：most of the time
5.I'm sorry i lose your time我感觉也不是很好。
6.Thanks for you giving us the nice memory.And thank you finish reading my letter.
：Thanks you for giving us the nice memory and finishing reading my letter.
不知道能不能！？可能我的水平有限，不要见怪^_^^_^