各位英文高手，看看我“心声”的语法错在哪

来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/09/23 02:23:33
My god，I don't have angel face and devil body,so i have a
我的天，我没有天使的脸孔和魔鬼的身体，我还是一个单身女孩。
single girl.
but i very enjoy this moment and always stop at thet moment.
但我很享受这个时刻，和永远停留在这个时刻。
Is my own voice!
是这是我心声
a single hose and a single bed.sometime,listening a
beautiful english song and look out of the window sky，is so good feel.I like there kind of feel!
一间单身房和一张单人床，有时听听一首优美的英文歌和看看窗外的天空，感觉真好，我喜欢这些感觉。

My god，I don't have angel`s face and devil`s body,yet i`m a single girl.
我的天，我没有天使的脸孔和魔鬼的身体，我还是一个单身女孩。
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I`m so enjoy this moment that i hope staying there forver但我很享受这个时刻，和永远停留在这个时刻。
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It`s the voice of my soul!
是这是我心声
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A single hose with a single bed.I like to listening wonderful english songs and looking at sky sometimes，it`s feels so good .I like the feeling!
一间单身房和一张单人床，有时听听一首优美的英文歌和看看窗外的天空，感觉真好，我喜欢这些感觉。

你得基础语法要加强了,包括开头大写,及物词得表达,还有连词前后动词要保持时态一致.

修改如下：

Oh my god, I don't have the angel's look and the devil's figure, and I am still single.

However, I enjoy the moment so much that I wish the time could stop flowing forever.

It is the voice from my heart.

I love the feeling that I stay in a single room with a s