谁能帮我把中文翻译成正宗的英语？

My results have improved, I have to write to me to help him, when I grow up I would also like to help others, to bring others to help themselves bring happiness.

My results have improved, I have to write to me to help him, when I grow up I would also like to help others, to bring others to help themselves bring happiness
绝对正确！！！

My marks is improved to some extent, I'll write the help he give me, I want to help others after I have grown up as well, bring the helps to others is bring happiness to myself, too

I have improved my degree. I have to thank him for helping me. I will help others when I grow up. Helping others can make oneself happy.