这句英语有语病吗?老觉得中间少了点什么。

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/09/13 09:00:06
One meets its destiny on the road he takes to avoid it.

往往在逃避命运的路上,却与之不期而遇。

One meets his destiny on the road he takes to avoid it.

就是只需要把its改为his就可以了

he takes to avoid it都是形容road,不需要有when/while一类的词。

One meets his destiny on the road while he takes it.

The road和he takes之间不需要别的,句子是对的

这个句子是没有问题的
以分析成分就出来了

its 改成 his