UC知道找英文语病
来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/06/27 19:58:54
拜托啊
I saw, I saw the joy which in your vision revealed at that time
Now, I hear, I hear the self-confidence which in your words reveals
But I thought I saw your eye is revealing throughout lightly sadly
on likely the sea, tranquil, eternal, romantic, actually melancholy
Facing the evil spirit incantation, you still bravely forward, we believe you can bring the victory
likely war-god, leads us to break through darkness
I saw, I saw the joy which in your vision revealed at that time
Now, I hear, I hear the self-confidence which in your words reveals
But I thought I saw your eye is revealing throughout lightly sadly
on likely the sea, tranquil, eternal, romantic, actually melancholy
Facing the evil spirit incantation, you still bravely forward, we believe you can bring the victory
likely war-god, leads us to break through darkness
But I thought I saw your eye is revealing throughout lightly sadly
第三行，最后应该是light sad吧？
首先throughout是介词，后面应该有名词，但后面用了两个副词。应该其中一个副词修饰另一个形容词，或者其中一个是形容词修饰另一个名词。应该这样吧。
不过，这些自由诗体的用次和语法一般比较随意，如果硬要挑骨头，也只能这样说了。
没语病
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