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The time has gone by,many things in these days changed lot that i am not fit it.i feel sad ,i miss the old days but it not come back.
now,i am a tudent in the key class everyone in there is perfact and i think i was the worst within them.teachers are vary good,they teached every lesson interesting,but sometimes,i don't undersand them.classmates around me often talk about the problems deeply that made me foolishly.so i am not happy this day.one thing occurs to me is to go home.

time has gone by,many things in these days hzve changed a lot that i am not used to it.i feel sad ,i miss the old days but it can not come back.
now,i am a student in the key class where everyone is perfect and i think i am the worst among them.teachers are very good,they make every lesson interesting,but sometimes,i don't undersand them.classmates around me often talk about some difficult problems that made me feel myself foolish.so i has been unhappy these day.an idea occurs to me is that i should go home.

错太多了
改不了

没错啊!

The第一个the 去掉 lot 前面加 a
fit--fit for come back--does not come back
tudent---student class--which class in there--in去掉 perfact--perfect

was--am within--among teached--teach
interesting--interestingly
make--make foolishly--foolish

一排的就是错误在同一排
有的大小写注意下

The time has gone by
改为 as time goes by

many things in these days changed lot that i am not fit it.i feel sad