这句话有语病么？该怎么修改？

来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/06/30 15:44:43
The seemingly reasonable claim that these problems could be handled by several individuals such as Rachel Carson who banned the use of DDT pesticides 60 years ago and started out the movement of environment protection, has made the general public difficult to separate the fact from fiction.

后半截 has made the general public difficult to separate the fact from fiction.这句话没主语，貌似这个逗号没弄对

The seemingly reasonable claim that these problems could be handled by several individuals such as Rachel Carson, who banned the use of DDT pesticides 60 years ago and started out the movement of environment protection, has made the general public difficult to separate the fact from fiction.Rachel Carson后应该用非限制性定语从句

看上去结构比较复杂，但是语病我没怎么看出来
除非是started 后面的out要去掉

至于LSS说的没主语，那肯定不对，claim是主语，只是修饰的太多
LS说的要非限制性定语从句，也值得商榷，因为后面描述的是Carson的显著特征，用限制性定语从句是不错的