UC知道Dear Ann3
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Dear Ann:
You are right! I just heard a classmate complained to me of his long working hours. He was on the night shift three days a week and sometimes asked to work overtime on sunday. So he don't want to do this job anymore.
I also loving taking photograph. Yesterday, I found a part-time job which was related to photograph. An Internet company, Bus Consultancy network, gave me a map and I began to collect the photos of landmarks . Two yuan a photos, I earn my money for food! Haha!
But I found that someone didn't like me to take photos, they didn't knew my job. In onder not to worry them, I will get up at 6:00 this morning and start mysterious job. That is a challenge.
Best wishes
这是一封信，我写的，应该有错误，请高手指正！
PS：Ann是我的一个美国老师。
You are right! I just heard a classmate complained to me of his long working hours. He was on the night shift three days a week and sometimes asked to work overtime on sunday. So he don't want to do this job anymore.
I also loving taking photograph. Yesterday, I found a part-time job which was related to photograph. An Internet company, Bus Consultancy network, gave me a map and I began to collect the photos of landmarks . Two yuan a photos, I earn my money for food! Haha!
But I found that someone didn't like me to take photos, they didn't knew my job. In onder not to worry them, I will get up at 6:00 this morning and start mysterious job. That is a challenge.
Best wishes
这是一封信，我写的，应该有错误，请高手指正！
PS：Ann是我的一个美国老师。
1.complained应为complain
2.可考虑改为He was on three night shifts a week
3.don't 改为doesn't
4.loving改为love photograph应为复数加s
5.which was related to太正式，应该为which had something to do with
6.Two yuan a photos表意不清，应该为they pay me two yuan for each photo，I earn my money for food不太符合美国人表达习惯，最好改为I can live on my own salery.
7.didn't like me to take photos不定式似乎有点问题，可考虑改为didn't like me when I take photos.
8.knew改为know.
(*^__^*) 希望对你有帮助~~~