UC知道我的GRE argument模考，求高人看看够四分么？
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不用太细看 就帮忙负责任的说个分就好了~
argument 53 time :30 minutes words:405
In this argument,the editorial asserts that melatonin increasing before birth may cause shyness during infancy and will effect the life longer.To support this recommendation the arguer quote a research which began thirteen years before of the connection of melatonin and the behaviors of 25 infants.This argument is logically defective in three critical respects.
First,the arguer assumes that the conclusion he drawed on the basis of the experiment of melatonin based on 25 infants.However,merely 25 infants are hardly sufficient to establish a general conclusion of all human.It is entirely conceivable that many other infants whose increased levels of melatonin are higher than normal levels have no signs of distress identified themselves as shy.Growing environments of children are also absolutely vital for the charactoristic of children,besides,the test has passed 13 years.Without eliminating this pos
argument 53 time :30 minutes words:405
In this argument,the editorial asserts that melatonin increasing before birth may cause shyness during infancy and will effect the life longer.To support this recommendation the arguer quote a research which began thirteen years before of the connection of melatonin and the behaviors of 25 infants.This argument is logically defective in three critical respects.
First,the arguer assumes that the conclusion he drawed on the basis of the experiment of melatonin based on 25 infants.However,merely 25 infants are hardly sufficient to establish a general conclusion of all human.It is entirely conceivable that many other infants whose increased levels of melatonin are higher than normal levels have no signs of distress identified themselves as shy.Growing environments of children are also absolutely vital for the charactoristic of children,besides,the test has passed 13 years.Without eliminating this pos
我十八日刚考，感觉你这篇还是挺不错的，除了一些小的拼写错误还有结构相对有点简单外。如果按照ETS给出的范文的标准而言，我觉得是绰绰有余了吧，不过据我们学校最近的情况而言，好像真实的标准比较高一些，因为很多自我感觉写的不错的同学最后成绩都不太理想，总之加油吧，写的已经很好了
考试关键在于你自己的心态。考好了，你不要骄傲，以免真正考试的时候而失败；考差了，你不要灰心，想着以后还有许许多多机会。这样，无论你考好或考差都不会伤心难过。
够了吧应该。