谁能帮忙修改英语短文？

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各位大侠！谁能帮忙修改一下这篇短文？

在线急等！改的好 有重赏！

短文如下

First,Thank you for reading my letter

Perhaps,I'm not a successful student.In the univercity entrance
examination,I'm a failure.I don't catch this chance.

In fact ,I want go this school for about three years already.
As this school become more and more famous,my determination
also become steadfast day by day .

Being a member of this school is still my dream.Having dialed the numer of this school, and after be told that I have chance
to be admitted.

So I choosen this school for my fist school.
Unfortunately,I was fail. My dream is fall through.
But I Still believe this school is my best chosen.

Although I don't have high mark but the passion of studying English will gave me brave,so I believe I can study well.
I just want to get a chance to prove myself.
If I get this opportunity, I will devote myself in

First,Thank you for reading my letter

I always assume that I would be accepted by your school.
As this school become more and more famous,my determination
also become steadfast day by day .

Dialing the numerber of your school, i was told that there is a chance
to be admitted.

So I choosen this school as my first school.
Unfortunately,I was rejected.
But I don't regret .I Still think this is the best choice.

I don't have high scores, but the passion of studying English will gave me courage and ,so I believe I can study well.

If I get this opportunity, I will devote myself into English
study . I just want to get a chance to prove myself.
Gave me a chance, I will give you a miracle.