请帮忙检查一下这篇英文短文有没有什么错误,谢谢

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/09/21 08:47:01
I had a happy summer vacation. I went to Olympics Forest Park. We visited Beijing National Stadium. As we say Bird's Nest. It's very huge and beautiful. It had held the opening ceremony of the Olympic Games and is going to hols the closing ceremony of the Olympic Games. I also visited National Aquatics Center. As we say Water Cube. It is colorful. I like it very much. And then we saw the Grand Fountain. I felt very excited and happy there.

有一些拼写错误,总体没有语法错误,但简单句太多,最好有一些变化

放到word文档上 它会告诉你哪有错(单词底下有红线的) 点右键 就有正确的了

as sb say somewhere (例如:As we say Water Cube)这是一种固定句型吗?