UC知道奥运会感想(请帮忙修改)
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Real Heroes
Dear teacher and students,
Good morning!
Today，I am very glad to stand here and give all of you a short speech. The topic of my speech is ‘Real Heroes’.
You know, the Beijing 2008 Olympic Games have been over and it received a favorable review. Why? I think the most important reason was that no matter what happened, all the sportsmen did not give up struggling against difficulties until the end. Of course, this also included Liu Xiang.
In fact, some people also criticized Liu Xiang for his retirement. But after you had seen how painful Liu Xiang was in the race, you would not do that. According to the news, Liu Xiang has been badly hurt before the race and he even tried to alleviate his pain by striking the injured foot on the wall. Just like that, Liu Xiang miraculously stood on the running track. Although he could not bear the pain at last, he has annotated the Olympic Spirit thoroughly. After all, he has tried his best.
Real Heroes
Dear teacher and students,
Good morning!
Today，I am very glad to stand here and give all of you a short speech. The topic of my speech is ‘Real Heroes’.
You know, the Beijing 2008 Olympic Games have been over and it received a favorable review. Why? I think the most important reason was that no matter what happened, all the sportsmen did not give up struggling against difficulties until the end. Of course, this also included Liu Xiang.
In fact, some people also criticized Liu Xiang for his retirement. But after you had seen how painful Liu Xiang was in the race, you would not do that. According to the news, Liu Xiang has been badly hurt before the race and he even tried to alleviate his pain by striking the injured foot on the wall. Just like that, Liu Xiang miraculously stood on the running track. Although he could not bear the pain at last, he has annotated the Olympic Spirit thoroughly. After all, he has tried his best.
Of course,Liu Xiang is one of them.
retirement 改为drop out
you would not do that 改为 you would change your mind
Just like that, Liu Xiang miraculously stood on the running track. 改为 Finally, Liu Xiang miraculously stood on the running track.
As we know, the Olympic Games just set a stage for man pursues the spirit of ‘higher, 一句至少两处不妥，建议 As we know, the Olympic Games is a grand stage for man to pursue the spirit of ‘higher,
So we should admire not only the successes, but also the sportsmen who have confidence and courage to challenge their limits. 分两句表达So we should admire not only the successes, but also the failures--those who try to challenge their limits with confidence and courage .