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As the development of the society,every generation of people is different in many ways,such as the way in which they think and the way in which they slove problems in the life,and the methods of their entainment and so on..
As we known,the old people are more conservative,for they used to live in fundel society,and this has an important impact on their ways of life,they may do everything carefully.On the other hand,as the older people may have experienced war time and they may lea a hard life then,so they cherish everything they own now and they never waste anything.However,the yong people are brought up in a peaceful society and they hardly experience hard life which their parent or grandparents have led,so they may take everything granted.However,nowdays,young men are also different from their elders in that,they are more willing to challenage themselves and try new things.This is good for the development of the yong people.
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