帮我看看这段的语法,和句子的顺序是否通顺。。。。

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/09/25 00:30:09
Most animals make adjustments to the difficult seasons, fall and winter. In the far North, many animals wear protective, heavy, white coats in the winter. Winter creates problems of food for many animals. Many birds and bats travel south to find an adequate supply of food in the winter. If they didn't migrate to the south, they wouldn't survive in the winter. In the fail, Beavers, Chipmunks, and other animals store food for winter. Some animals sleep through the winter such as squirrels, foxes, and bears. As a result, animals practive these methods that they can survive and reproduce the following year.
把Titile定为: Animals in Winter 是否合适????

我认为:

many animals wear -- many animals have
In the fail -- In the Fall
animals practive -- animals practice
methods that -- methods so that

Title: Animals Prepare for Harsh Winter
(动物准备度过严寒)

觉得animals in winter不太合适,太片面。少说了一方面:动物如何准备过冬。题目应该定位:how do animals prepare for and spend the winter.