那位大侠帮我改一下这个(指出错的地方)拜托了

来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/07/16 11:05:47
Family is the basic of society and it develop after the society.For thousand of years live in the feudalism self-sufficiency small-scale peasant economy lead in china that makes family do be not just a basic of daily life,but also the production units.Follow the big change in china go through with a long time passed the feudal period,the half-feudal period and the semi-colonial period go into the socialist society in recent hundred years.This historic develop even changed the chinese family structure.The big family with many numbers separate with many small family or inmediate family.
Then the nuclear family become more common.After 1949,especially after 50th many lady out of family to go to work.They have their own incomes and this give an end to the days only lived by man’s income.
我自己可可巴巴翻的,错的很多.

The family is the basic unit of society
第一句话形容词basic后面缺少中心词，basic什么呀？基本的unit 应该是基本单位。加个 unit
it developes after the society is formed.你是想说家庭是在社会形成以后发展的？还是想说家庭在社会形成以前发展的？最好把中文放上。
第三句话同for thousand of years 是几千年来的意思吧，thousand 缺个s加上
变成thousands of years，后面的话缺主语，谁生活在封建社会呀？自给自足的小农经济社会，这些话的主语没啦。而且自给自足的小农经济译错了，应该是：self-subsistence peasant economy 这句话似乎应该改为:Under China's feudal self-subsistence peasant economy for thousands of years in the past,Chinese families served as not only the basic units of daily life but also the production units.
Great changes has taken place in China since she terminated the rules of feudal and semi-feudal authorities to step into the socialism society.
Chinese family structures has been changed with the history development. big families consists of many family members has now decomposited into nuclear families or medium-scaled family.
the nuclear families has been common in China. since liberation esp in the 1950s, m