英语求助，急用，在线等待，谢谢！！

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我写了一封信，但是肯定有一些低级语法错误，可是却基本不懂语法，帮忙改动一下。（在保证正确的前提下，改动处越少越好）。谢谢！！

改好加分哦！

Dear Mingji:
How excited I am.,when I write this letter to you.Because,it is the frist time I write to a foreign girl.
Form my piont of view,what a cute girl you are! A gril whom worth I trust,cherish,care for regardless the distance.
My present life as quiet as a cup of water without passion,no depression.The only thing makes me pressured is the cet-6.But I always try to keep smell stay on my face.And I recommend you do the same.
Generally speaking ,our assignment isn’t very heavy.In fact,very easy to deal with.There is so much pressure when we at middle school and senior school,we all studying very hard,and almost have no leisure.But now,the stric discipline mever come again.We can graduate easily.So they willing to do what they want.Haha,we have a plenty of leisure time.My roommaters always spend ot on computer games rather than studying.Our dormitory always full of l

Dear Mingji:
How excited I am.,when I write this letter to you.Because,it is the frist time I has writen to a foreign girl.
From my piont of view,what a cute girl you are! A gril whom worth trusting,cherish,care for regardless the distance.
My present life as quiet as a cup of water without passion,and no depression.The only thing makes me pressured is the cet-6.But I always try to keep smile stay on my face.And I recommend you to do the it as well.
Generally speaking ,our assignment isn’t very heavy.In fact,it is very easy to deal with.There is so much pressure when we at middle school and senior school.We all study very hard,and almost have no leisure.But now,the strict discipline has never come again.We can graduate easily.So they are willing to do what they want.Haha,we have a plenty of free time.My roommates always spend on computer games rather than study.Our dormitory always full of laughter and cheer!Sometimes I made a little noise.I may play with the