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Lily,she is my sister.
She is a college student in Zhejiang.She study is very well,I’m so envy in her.You are my idol in my heart.
She has many hobbies,like sings,draws,dances,plays computer and reads books.She is just a ordinary girl.But,I think she’s different from most girl such as read.
Now,most girls very like reads,but it’s just novel.She tells me,she very hates that special love novel.She thinks it’s boring so much.And I ask her what’s the book do you like?She said,she reads books about The History of Ancient China,but she doesn’t like history lesson.In her eyes it the same as love novel is boring.For me,she’s kind of unique!
Ah,this is my sister.A litter bit ordinary girl and a litter bit out of the ordinary girl.I hope you can enjoy my sister,Lily.
Lily,who is my sister.
She is a college student in Zhejiang.She is good at study ,I’m so envy in her.She is my idol in my heart.
She has many hobbies,like singing,drawing,dancing,playing computer and reading books.
Nowaday,many girls like reading very much,but most of them only read novels.She tells me that she dislike the special love novel .She thinks it’s so boring .And I ask her what kind of the book she likes?She said that she often reads books about The History of Ancient China.She thinks they are much more interesting than those about love story.For me,she’s so special!
Ah,this is my sister.A girl has her own style in reading.I hope you can like my sister Lily.
楼主你原文有很多语法错误，
学英语要认真点了
Lily is my sister. She is a college student in Zhejiang and who's study is very good with my envy of her.She is a idol in my heart by she's hobbies,like singing,drawing,danceing,playing computer and reading books. She is different from other