In summer holiday

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In summer holiday, I went to Guangzhou and did a lot of meaningful things.
I climbed White Cloud mountain, Evening Cruise and ate a Japanese sushi with my elder sister, It’s funny.
I at Guangzhou book-selling center buy a book of time, saw world champion, Hu jia、Yang jing hui and Lao li shi. It was wonderful.
This summer holiday I learned a lot of things, increased own self-confident, I have a good time!
增添了自信心 怎么说 这篇文章有语法上的错误吗 请大家帮忙改正 我10号就要讲了。。。

I at Guangzhou book-selling center buy a book of time,
I bought a book of time at Guangzhou book-selling center

self-confident
self-confidence

I have a good time!
I had a good time!

in改成during比较好
白云山前加the
ate后的a去掉
叮 后面的错误太多 太直译了 建议改下

learned a lot 就OK 不要OFth ..

这个是不是有点短？ 一分钟不要就讲完了