【高分】寻找高手改作文

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Dear Marek:
Hello Marek my name is yuki. I'm 16 years old.
Four people in my family. They are my parents,
my brother and I. My parents are friendly and
patient,they hardly ever to get mad at me.They
often tell me the truth. My brother is 26 years
old. He is a staff in a japanese company. He
studied in Tokyo 4 years. So he's japanses is
very well.
I have a lot of friends. My best friend is yomiko.
She is a student, too. She studys act. She want
to be an excellent actress. We usually shopping
together and often make phone call.
I have many hobbies, like play the paino, paly
online games, see films, read novels, and I also
like play chess. I don't like watch TV, because
I think it's very boring.
My ambition is to be a costume designer, coz I want
many people wear my designe style costume everywhere.
Now do you know sth about me?

Dear Marek:
() My name is yuki. I'm 16 years old.
Four people in my family. They are my parents,
my brother and I. My parents are friendly and
patient,they hardly ()get mad at me.They
often tell me the truth.(they always have a scincere communitaion with me)
My brother is 26 years
old. He is a staff in a japanese company. He
studied in Tokyo 4 years. So (his) japanses is
very well.
I have a lot of friends. My best friend is yomiko.
She is a student, too. She studys act(art/drama performance?). She want(s) to be an excellent actress. We usually (go) shopping
together and often (communicate using phone).
I have many hobbies, (such as) play(ing) the paino, paly(ing)
online games, (watching) films, read(ing) novels, and I also
like play(ing) chess. I don't like watch(ing) TV, because
I think it's very boring.
My ambition is to be a costume designer, coz I want
many peo