我写的英语日记1 希望大家改正其中的错误！

来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/07/04 15:04:18
today is sunday，and it is aslo mid-autumn festival！
i get up early this morning，i hope i can have a meaningful and wonderful day！
when i got up ，i quickly wash my face ，and finish breakfast ，
then i read english book，and surf the Internet
i hope ever one have a good mid-autumn festival！

就写这么多，一定有些地方不是习惯的用法
希望英语高手帮我指正
在此感谢了！！！！！！！！！！！
when i got up ，i quickly wash my face ，and finish breakfast ，

这句 好像有两个谓语

应该如何改！！！！

修改的比较大， 但是这样才是真正的表示方法

It's sunday today and is aslo the mid-autumn festival！I hope I have a meaningful and wonderful day today.

I got up very early this morning. I had my breakfast after I quickly washed my face . Then I started to read english book and surfe the Internet

I wish everyone has a fantastic mid-autumn festival！

and it is aslo mid-autumn festival！ 中秋节前少冠词 the
i quickly wash my face 语序不对 i wash my face quickly更地道
then i read english book少冠词 read an English book 或 read English books
internet要大写首字母Internet
i hope ever one have a good mid-autumn festival everyone 表示每个人时要合写，everyone作主语，谓语动词要用单数，将have改成has
时态有些乱，加油哦！

1.when i got up ，i quickly wash my face ，and finish breakfast
把wash改成washed，把finish改成finished
2.i get up early this morning
把get改成got
3.then i read english book，and surf the Internet
把surf改成它的过去时（是什么我也不知道）= =
4.i hope every one have a good mid-autumn festival