英语作文，帮忙看看有无纰漏

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I realized my first disavantage was easy giving up when I met difficult things .我意识到我最大的缺点是当遇到阻碍时，轻言放弃

I realized (that) my biggest disadvantage was/is giving up easily when encounter difficulty.

分析:
1."最大的缺点"应是biggest disadvantage,当然first有时也含有最大的意思,但此处我觉得牵强;
2."遇到阻碍"我觉得difficuty比difficult things要地道和简洁;

其他的楼主可以对比下,仅供参考.

还有,disadvantage你拼错了.

I realized that my biggest shortcoming was to give up easily when I encounter diffculties.

...楼主这个英文句子貌似很有中国味道。。。

I realized my biggest disadvantage is that I usually fail to follow things through to the end whenever I meet difficulties.