纠正八年级英语作文

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We will to the collective trip, and the destination are Taishan and Qingdao. We are staying for 2 days in Taishan, Taishan is Sacred Mountains first of China .Taishan is very grand. We are climbing the mountain and taking photos. We are staying for 3 days in Qingdao, Qingdao is well-known coastal city. The 2008 Beijing Olympic Games sailing competition is Held in Qingdao. There are blue sea and beautiful beaches in Qingdao. We are going to the beach, visiting to museums,going shopping, and tasting seafood.And please everyone with a camera, and wearing sports shoes.
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We will go on a collective trip and the destinations are Taishan and Qingdao. We will stay there for 2 days in Taishan, Taishan is a Sacred Mountain ranking first in China .Taishan is very grand. We are going to climb the mountain and take photos. We will stay in Qingdao for 3 days , Qingdao is a well-known coast city. The 2008 Beijing Olympic Games sailing competition will be held in Qingdao. There are blue sea and beautiful beaches in Qingdao. We are going to the beach, visit to the museums,go shopping, and tast the seafood.And please everyone take a camera, and wear sport shoes.