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Exciting for me to create, for me to dominate. Childhood is just a wonderful little more than an instant, but this moment is very long, too long and it is branded in the minds of the moment in mind.
Childhood, a colorful Tang Zhi. In between, I Changjin its taste. It was magical, often changing the taste. Sometimes sweet sweet, so my face has hung the sweet smile; hard sometimes hard to make my crystal tears fall to push, to infiltrate my clothes, my heart; sometimes acid is very acid, I tasted it has never had the taste of the plum still immature than the acid, which is a blurred taste. Sometimes I think that is the heart of sugar to whom I eat it?Is the mother, she was born as soon as we put it into my mouth because I like her earlier, Chang Jin ups and downs of the world. Now, I Tangzhi goes with sitting in the window watching afford it. Why is it such a big magic, why it has so much power? It will also be able to grasp my life?
Childhood is a colorful windmill. Ying Zhaof

Excitement was created and dominnated by me.As for me ,childhood is just a little wonderful and istant time ,but the moment was long so that I was sharped it in my mind.
Childhood,a colourful sweet cloth.Meanwhile,I tasted all its smells.It was magical,changing unstantly its taste .One time it was very sweet,which made me take on smile on my facw;another time ,hard and hard,which pull my tears out of my eyes so that they infiltrated my clothes 待续