英语!!!T-T!!!

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Revise the following sentences. Try to make them concise.

1. In the year 1840 the Opium War broke out.

2. There are more books in their library than in our library.

3. He returned back home after he graduated from college.

4. We planned to meet just before sunrise very early in the morning.

5. The cause of the flood was due to the heavy rain in late spring.

6. He was asked to repeat the sentence again.

7. I play badminton equally as well as my brother.

8. It seemed to his friends that his attitude was of a puzzling nature.

9. These watermelons are large in size and sweet in taste.

10. He did not tell the truth with an honest attitude.

11. There are a number of students who want to join the drama club.

12. He was kind enough to let me share the same umbrella with him.

13. Zhao was the person who was elected the representative of the class by the

1. In the year of 1840, the Opium War broke out.

2. There are more books in their library than there are in our library. 这题不确定是不是“there are”但肯定是有词在in our library前面的。这里比较的是两个图书馆的书不是两个图书馆。

3. He returned home after he graduated from college.
return 和back语意重复了,所以去掉back
4. We planned to meet just before sunrise, very early in the morning. 这个中文叫什么从句不记得了。逗号后面very early in the morning 是对before sunrise 的补充说明。

5. The cause of the flood was due to the heavy rain in late spring.
两种改法,要不把cause去掉,变成“The flood was due to the heavy rain in late spring.”,或者把due to 去掉“The cause of the flood was the heavy rain in late spring.”。因为cause 本身就有原因的意思,后面用due to就重复了。
6. He was asked to repeat the sentence.
这个也是重复,repeat 和again重复了。

7. I play badminton equally as well as my brother.
这里考两点:重复和比较对象
句子想说的是我打羽毛球打得和哥哥一样好,比较的是打羽毛球这个事,而不是我和哥哥比较。所以应该改成:I play badminton as well as my brother does.后面要根据谓语动词的形式,加助动词,例如这里加了“dose”。
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