白送分！帮忙检查一下这段话有无语法上的错误？（英语）

I have received your email.Thanks for your help.And please send my best regards to my aunt.

Happy every day没有错

Dear uncle,

I have received your e-mail. Thank you for your help. Please remember me to your family.

Wish you happiness every day！

比较正规礼貌。

Dear Uncle:

I have received your email.Thank you very much for your help. And kindly please convey my best regards to my aunt.

Wish you happiness daily
Happy every day!

把my help 该成your help就很好了,很口语,很自然,不能把家信写成八股文了.