帮我检查一下这段英语翻译正确吗？

来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/06/30 14:26:00
以下是连接:(字数太多，问题补充发不下)
http://home.51.com/diary.view.php?user=zhanlandetiankong&id=10033109
如果翻译错了的话，请好心人帮我修改一下，
有悬赏哦，谢谢啦！

She had a pretty daughter她有一个漂亮女儿
whose name was Snow White.命名为白雪公主。

The queen married another queen.女王结婚的另一王后。 什么意思？？？

snow white was dressed in rags and forced to ...by her stepmother

such as 后面用进行时

mirror ,on the world 吧？

Take Snow White to the wild forest and pick some flowers

I don’t want to see her any more.

后面看不下去了，帮到你这里