请帮我看下这句英语对吗，谢谢

我觉得may最好该成can

OK

I wish that i can get the opportunity for my furture education in your colloge/university. 这样会更好。

I hope I 'll have a chance for further study in your university.

有些问题。
I hope to obtain the opportunity to further my studies at your university.

还不错！大概可以