有关汇款到帐的翻译

I am glad to receive your remittance note, but the payment has not arrived in our account yet, please make sure you have send out the payment without problem.
其实，这样说起来不太可以，好像是怀疑人家汇钱上有问题，既然已经给你汇款底单了，不如改的客气点。
I am glad to receive your remittance note, but the payment has not arrived in our account yet, once the payment has been cleared, I will let you know asap. Meanwhile, would you please check with you bank to make sure there is no problem.
就是说，我知道你汇出钱了，正在等到帐。但是为了保险起见，是不是请你也去你的银行看一下。

第一，MONEY作主语后面不能用ARRIVE。
第二，语气比较生硬，建议加PLEASE.
第三，最后一个单词拼写错了。应该用副词SUCCESSFULLY。

建议更改如下： Thank you very much for your payment slip, but we are sorry to find it's not cleared yet. Please kindly make sure that everything goes well with the payment process.