To his surprise he finds himself loking directiy into the eye of the mokey.

改一下句子先：

To his surprise he finds himself looking directly into the eye of the monkey.

让他吃惊的是他发现自己正在直接看着那只猴子的眼睛。

令他吃惊的是，他发现自己直直地望着猴子的眼睛。

个人觉得：他惊奇地发现他被猴猴直直地盯着~

令他吃惊，他发现自己loking directiy进入眼睛的mokey 。