UC知道请高手帮忙翻译下以下句子
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请高手帮忙翻译下以下句子,要翻译得通顺一点的哦:死亡的比例在前4个小时随着时间的增加而增加,在4或6个小时的时候达到最大值,但在8小时的时候却下降得很明显.
The proportion of deaths in the former 4 hours over time increases in the 4 or 6 hours of time to achieve maximum value, but in the 8-hour time has dropped very significantly.
The propotion of deaths increases with time in the first 4 hours ,and reaches maximum at the 4 or 6 hour,but declines significantly at the 8 hour.
the propotion of death rate increases with time in the first 4 hours ,and approch the max at 4 or 6 ,but declined significant at 8
The proportion of deaths in the former 4 hours over time increases in the 4 or 6 hours of time to achieve maximum value, but in the 8-hour time has dropped very significantly.
你觉得我翻译得怎样啊？