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我要疯了，系统显示太长不然我全放上来～能放一点是一点吧～
Hehe. That is not an advertisemen. That just is what I do when I waiting bus or waiting class. Nowadays, more and more people watch some short movie, listen some music, and play some cell phone game when they feel along. I though it is a good thing until I read this article. It let me realize maybe we too busy twirling through the songs on our iPod to forget some origin feeling. So let’s get start.
This article is from “The Sydney morning herald march 21-23, 2008. The name of article is “my iPod ate my brain”. Firstly, Can I ask you a question? What stuffs you want to check in your pocket when you leave home? Girl friend or boy friend? Of course not, even some people really want to. When people leave home, they often fear to forget trinity of things -- keys, wallet and mobile phone. Some people even have a good sleep if her mobile phone out of the arm’s length.
That is not an advertisement. That is just what I did when I was waiting for bus or waiting for class. Nowadays, more and more people watch some short movies, listen to music, and play some games on their cell when they feel along. I thought it is a good thing until I read this article. It let me realize maybe we are too busy twirling through the songs on our iPod to forget some origin feeling. So let’s get start.
This article is from “The Sydney morning herald march 21-23, 2008. The name of article is “my iPod ate my brain”. Firstly,cCan I ask you a question?
What stuffs do you have in your pocket when you leave home? Girl friend or boy friend? Of course not, even some people really hope to.（老实说，这一段我不太明白你想要表达什么。可否请你再整理一下你的逻辑？）
When people leave home, they often fear to forget trinity of things -- keys, wallet and mobile phone. Some people even have a good sleep if her mobile phone out of the arm’s length.
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